Born Under A Bad Moon

[Jeffrey610]

dj,
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!! You know, I had MLK as the first reference lyric, but thought it was TOO vague. ( I am pedantic, and think others are not so) Did I spell vein incorrectly? Shame!!! Corrections abound. Does Sherry have a "Spell Check" option?
Truth: I had a first draft that had Strings, Guitars, Horns and Background Singers in it. I thought it would take away from the Message. But, your so right, a guitar line would make 'Bad Moon' a little more melodic. Your fade corrections are right on! Performance
Values. . .Who knew.
Again, thank you for the Critique. The song (and I) am better for them.
Jeffrey 610

[rrayner]

Good music, good message, Jeffery. Glad to see you back.

I agree with David - a much more gradual diminuendo would be very effective.

As always, I LOVE your percussion work (and I'm basically just a tenor sax player who just knows what he likes to hear - and solid, driving rhythm is right up there). One of these days I will try to dig more into what you are doing in percussion (Sigh! Where does the time go?).

Ralph Rayner