Question on staves

[dj]

Hi, Wyndham:

Seems reasonable enough, although I've attached a file with a few suggestions on re-transcription. Just my own ideas, not the gospel, of course.

I just made some changes up to about bar 18, no further.

My thought was that it's easier to keep that broken triads going in one hand that splitting them between two, so I tried to keep the right hand going more steadily.

Bar 15 shows a possible idea to bring out the upper note melody by having the left hand cross over to pick the high notes out while the right hand keeps the rhythm moving steadily.

Have fun!

David