[adrianallan]

I think you've achieved some nice sonorities with the harp and I'm sure this will grow on me with more listens.

Unlike some other scoring software Notation Composer does not automatically lower the double bass notes by an octave. So I think that you have the double bass notes an octave higher than you intended. They should look like they mainly have lower ledger lines or near the bottom of the stave to sound right - at the moment your DB is often higher than the cellos.

I will have another listen to all of it before long

cheers

adrian